The Apple Family in The Nature

this is quite funny and very original,the impact it had on me was big and it made me laugh a lot so impact is high in my eyes,your technique is good but it is a little odd.
your outlining lines are a bit large and your ponies for heads are big and your eyes on them are tiny and small with uneven eye lashes and gicantic pupals
and apple blooms bow is sort of lopsided in the last frame with the, "doodie",in side of it.im now running out of things to say.so to sum it up,this was a very good comic