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With a little encouragement by Rainbow Dash, Pinkie tries to do some flying... but how will it end for her?
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Overall Vision Originality Technique ImpactThis is my second critique, so I'm not that kind of "master" in writing.
I'll start with vision: The backgrounds fit every panel, they're not the same everywhere, good job on this. What I can't say I like is that the comic is made in a cartoonish-style, while the backgrounds are from real life. If they were cartoonish it would've looked better.
About the style of the drawing I'll talk at tehnique.
Originality: It is pretty original, even if I've seen comics with Pinkie wanting to fly, but this one is different, as Pinkie doesn't succeed. Good job on this, I really like it!
Tehnique: Sadly, the tehnique isn't amazing. The mouths aren't that great, and what I don't like is the black parts from Pinkie's fall or twiching ear, they would've looked better if they were white or a brighter color of each pony's coat color.